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Hyenas 3: A Surprise Visit to The Valleyby@bobnoxious

Hyenas 3: A Surprise Visit to The Valley

by Bob WrightApril 6th, 2023
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In this science fiction graphic novel or comic book our heroine SheLa Nouveau accompanies the Leon on a mission of some import to a planet named The Valley. The Leon and SheLa are actually off to investigate reports of strange events and displays of seemingly modern technology appearing among the nomads and village dwellers of the high desert plains.
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In this science fiction graphic novel or comic book, our heroine, SheLa Nouveau, accompanies the Leon on a mission of some import to a planet named The Valley.


The Valley hadn't always been called that, its former designation was an alphanumeric string that gave no indication about the place, which had been a weapons lab for the Ishtar.


In contemporary times, it had become a development site for biomorphic organisms, mostly cyborgs that were euphemistically called entertainment units.


But now, The Leon and SheLa are tourists who are actually off to investigate reports of strange events and displays of seemingly modern technology appearing among the nomads and village dwellers of the high desert plains.

SheLa began with an ebullient greeting for the Catty Chatters, "Buenas noches chicas! [Good evening girls!]"

"I just got back from the most amazing trip! Last I had talked with the Leon he was just chilling at his place in the favela he favors. Not sure why he prefers that lifestyle with his resources. But..."

"Then about three weeks ago now, I was doing my Chakra Alignments meditations when I get a call from the Leon."

"Says he is at the port or will be soon and he wants me to meet him there on the quick. Dress like a tourist going someplace warm. Very warm."

"Before long, we hit The Inphus Gate's black hole portal."

"The transit thru the Inphus Gate hole was really quick, just a blue flash before we popped through it."

"We popped out very near Adair's Spiral and continued with the quantum pulse drive."

"We made our insertion into the atmosphere of this planet, The Valley, towards dawn and there was a bit of dust blowing."

"So our descent was quite the scenic display of hot times." She chuckled.

"The planet we were now down on had not always been called "The Valley" but instead had recently been named with a string of alphanumerics that made its nature obscure. Before the already arid climate became even drier, the place had a bit of traffic. Human traffic, or at least sort of human."

"Most of the planetary traffic went to a megaplex habitat and "research center" whose primary products at that time were weapons grade bionics produced for the Ishtar. Some penchant for descriptive names led to the place being called the Megaplex."

"But the original attraction of the planet in more or less contemporary times was rare earth elements and radioactives in abundance. There were still a couple of huge open pit mining operations on the opposite hemisphere of The Valley from the Megaplex.


Even so, there was less of such activity now that the Ishtar's aims of empire had been squelched. Hooray for our side, right?"

"There were a few uninhabitable sites as well, entire villages left abandoned to their deceased inhabitants after some accident or another."

"Now even the once glorious Megaplex had gone to structures more suited to the arid climate, and there was little remaining vegetation."

"The Valley had continued in biomorphic research even after the Ishtar dreams of conquest ended. The Leon and I were feigning being an archeologists tourist couple with an interest in obtaining a cyborg "entertainment unit", especially since we were already here. Some were more biological than were others.”

"But there is no judgement in the limits of taste, and there was obviously also a market for more metallic pleasures."

"Out in the actual valley there were a couple of hardscrabble open pit digs."

"Most of the diggers lived a kind of rough, life on the edge sort of existence. Most of them lived pretty much out in the open with their collection of what not cans and the like."

"But a few of them had erected these round stone huts."

"A family group or some sort of clan related folks might live in one but still have their fire pit close by."

"The staple item of their diet was these sand dogs."

"The sand dogs were less plentiful now than they once had been, but there didn't seem to be much hunger."

"You might occasionally see some cooked up in a stew of sorts, but most of them ended up as barbecued delights."

"We were touristas, yes? Archeologists also looking at entertainment units, right?" A slight chuckle punctuated her remarks. "So we ended up at this place called Hoochim's Bar doing touristy things."

"Seems the place, not the Bar, but The Valley at least, had a huge body of legends about the sand dogs and some critter called a fire rat. They showed us this local artist's depiction of a "fire hut".

"Our server set out a little bowl and lit its contents afire. In just moments a fire rat came to investigate. They were drawn like moths to a flame."

"Another table had its own visitor. The fire and the food provided plenty of rat bait."

"Outside of the Megaplex area, out in the deserts, they were baited and trapped for use as foodstuffs."

"According to legend, the sand dogs and the fire rats were both carnivorous and preferred cooked meat."

"We saw some strange art about "the legend of Cheelo" but damned if the art or the legend made any sense to me."

"One thing that was kind of interesting in an arcane sort of a way was some artifact, apparently artistic in intent, that had been found out in the deserts. It had a slightly different appearance depending on the angle of your view. No one had ever come up with a satisfactory explanation for what it was."

"Maybe it was partly that we were faking the tourist kitsch, but frankly you've seen one fire rat you've seen enough fire rats, know?" Another slight chuckle.


"Anyway this fellow named Jozz, an obvious augment, came to our table and said Heevus would be along shortly. The Leon offered him a seat but he declined. Obviously things were starting to happen."

"It was just a couple or three minutes later this Heevus Jeroob fellow came up to our table."

"And his partner whose name was Nyuka accompanied him. Heevus told us he and Nyuka had been together for quite some time. Nyuka had been a researcher in the biodomes of the Megaplex when they met."

"One of the things that had initially drawn Heevus to The Valley was the evidence of numerous past inhabitants that had somehow disappeared over time. Archeological curiosities abounding.


One place we saw on the way to his camp was possibly some sort of a temple, now obviously long abandoned. By whom? Or perhaps what?"

"Another interesting place we saw was a jerbo hut. This one was one of a very few that had been found at widely separated locations. Was it a shelter, or maybe some sort of an outpost, again from who knew when or by whom it was used.


Heevus and Nyuka had spent a lot of time investigating these sorts of places. Perhaps it was observing this curiosity that had led the nomads to allow contact."

"Before long, we arrived at Heevus' desert camp. It was a bit more than half way across the distance between the Megaplex and the Valley Wall. Most of the habitat's livable space was actually underground."

"Heevus and Nyuka had a pair of the sand dogs named Bella and Luigi. They were kind of like pets."

"This pair had one pup that Heevus and Nyuka had kept. The Leon made some remark about lunch nuggets that didn't go over real well."

"I guess that made it seem like a good time for Heevus to tell us about some hellified critter called a sand scorpion. There was apparently some chance we might encounter one on our trek.
I am thinking trek? So we are going on a trek?


Now it looked like the script was indeed developing."

"If this thing jabbed you it was virtually always fatal. But the time between being jabbed and death would seem like an eternity in your own personal Hell of pain, physical and emotional. Being jabbed was in fact how Heevus had met Nyuka.


She was a researcher on sand scorpions, or more accurately the intended weaponization of sand scorpions, and she had possession of a potential antidote. They never said what had initially prompted her decision to rescue Heevus.


Heevus told us that he had undergone every sort of spiritual conversion imaginable while he spent time in pain within the temple of the sacred and the profane. The rescue had led to gratitude and friendship and finally to romance. Now they were partnered."

"There was a pause, a short lull in the talk, and then Heevus brought up the trilobe flux unit. There had been a spate of strange events or manifestations of late and one of the nomads had told Heevus of seeing something like a flux unit being bartered in or near Kingo Dorn.


Even more, apparently some of the nomads were playing with one, that is they were actively exploring its capabilities. I saw the Leon cast a frown, and then I knew why we were here. Or at least part of why we were here."

"Then Heevus showed us a viewbie of some structure called "The Gate" that was just a few clicks from Kingo Dorn. I gathered that Kingo Dorn was a settlement or at least some location of note. The Gate was apparently not a primitive structure, almost made a statement of sorts."

"But he told us to look closely at his next viewbie. It was obviously the same place and yet not quite somehow. The Leon's analytics picked up the addition of a new door of sorts in two places.
Heevus said that indeed was what was of import."

"The next day we were all going to depart on a trek toward the Valley Wall, a range of steep mountains at the Valley's edge. We were all going to use exosuits but our transportation would be old school hiking on foot.


The idea was to appear like we were all along on one of Heevus' archeology explorations, and it seemed the nomads frowned on vehicles."

"Heevus had a pair of Pack Dillos and there was some discussion about using them. They were about a meter tall and each could easily pack 750 kilos for a long trek, and that without any food or water for weeks. Place like this they could be worth their weight in gold as they used to say."

"Later, we went outside and joined some folks at their fire. They had a sand dragon they had more or less domesticated and some of the adults would join us on the trek. Yes, the barbecue was excellent."

"Just a bit after the barbecue we looked at a viewbie of some new construction activities that had been discovered by the nomads. We couldn't tell from just these viewbies, but the Leon and Heevus and Nyuka all said it looked to have other purposes than habitat.


Maybe they were seeking the same thing we were set to look for."

"And near this new construction there was also a new group of strange huts, but there was no sign of inhabitants or activity. All of this leant the impetus of curiosity to our quest."

"Once we had traversed the Valley Wall range, the high desert plateau lay seemingly endless before us.”

"We came up over some dunes, and suddenly this huge sand dragon crested over a dune before us. Heevus wanted a closer look and took off up the dune."

"Then, just about as quickly, another pair of dragons appeared, but these two looked like they could be holojects instead of real creatures. One of the nomads said this was the sort of strange things others had also seen."

"But then, the second pair kind of evaporated, and the first one scuttled away over the dune and out of our sight."

"There was little comfort in the heat and endless sand before us."

"Finally, we saw some desert nomads that were not in our group. Heevus said we were fairly near Kingo Dorn, and this group might even be from there, more or less."

"One of the nomads was an adult female who spoke with one from our group."

"She had a small herd of some kind of livestock animal she was shepherding. Some of her companions hung back."

"And strangely enough, there was a fairly good sized group of sand dogs nearby watching us from their dune."

"Just a few clicks later and we were at Kingo Dorn. It was now obvious that it was in fact some sort of a settlement, village sized by my approximation. No walls or boundary structure, just these round hut like buildings, some of them cone shaped. No grid or street layout, just random placement like mushrooms."

"Near the outskirts of the built up area, we came across this jug vendor set up in an open area. Kind of place you could use a good jug I am guessing."

"Then we saw this guy with his brightly colored textile offerings, looked like clothing. The Leon told the fellow that he had an unusual collection, we didn't see such very often. So the fellow chuckles and pipes up with an, ‘I should hope not! They are funeral garments.’ I was floored.”

"We were coming up on a more densely built up area and we saw yet another jug vendor. There was something jarring about that." SheLa brayed with laughter at her pun.


"Anyway, this group or area all seemed to have these like straw hats instead of the hoods or caps on most of the nomads."

"Here and there, on what might pass as a sidewalk, we saw a nomad standing alone as though that corner might be their turf."

"We saw two couples at barter who were obviously surprised that we saw them, and the Leon said a soft "ah ha, yes" to the rest of us.

"By now, it was evening and we joined a group around a village firepit to share sand dog barbecue or whatever other fare might appear. The occasional sand dragon offered a small change from the everyday."

"We passed the night in our pop tents right out in an open area, and the next day we were up at first light. We were dressed in our wardrobe department version of nomad couture (a slight chuckle) in the hope we'd better fit in."

"We saw this guy waking up where he had fallen out. Most of the nomads had everything they owned on their back, and this guy looked to be no exception. Success was measured in terms of survival."

"We saw these guys trading what looked to be pottery bowls. We asked them if they knew about any strange recent events, or a 'gate'. No, of course not. We should ask at the shop of many colors just down the way. Maybe our luck would improve."

"Indeed, there was a place just a couple of spaces down from this shop, a place that looked to have colorful and perhaps upscale wares. There was no apparent enthusiasm for our presence, like we were a bunch of interlopers. Which, being honest, we were exactly.


Strangely, when we asked if they knew anything about a gate or magical events and sightings, they all immediately clammed up, looked away even. Except one woman, she might have been in charge, she pointed across the open area at a nomad standing by himself and said simply, "That one."


Then they all went back to haggling like we were no longer there. We took the hint."

"This guy seemed almost to be expecting us as he watched us coming towards him. Even so, his greeting came as at least a small surprise."


"Greetings and warm salutations Mr. Jeroob. I have heard so much about your good work." He piped up as we closed to hailing distance.

"Heevus asked him straightaway if he had ever seen a flux unit or knew anything about them? No was the reply, but he knew who did. Progress."

"So this fellow, his name was Churl, took us to meet a couple of traders with such knowledge. We had interrupted their bargaining, and Heevus asked them if they knew of any such artifact. They offered up that they did not have such a device, but they knew who did for a certainty.”

"This next pair said that yes they knew of such things. They had also heard we might be coming. And they confirmed our understanding that this all involved a place called 'The Gate'. Indeed, it did look like a gate but without much of a wall or fence.


We had made the few clicks out to this place in good time, and yes, now we could see there were now doors open to the outside. Heevus and the Leon went ahead to reconnoiter."

"They found a small room through the door at the base of the gate. These guys had been out just looking around after a particularly strong sandstorm, and they had found the changes in the Gate, the doorway, which they were now referring to as the temple.


In the temple, so they said, they could show us the flux unit."

"The Leon and Heevus were either fearless or foolish, but they seemed to take what was said at face value. Anyway, we all went into the room to watch what we were to be shown."

"First, there was something like a dimensional shift, distortions in their appearance."

"And that became more profound pretty quickly."

"But then these two guys normalized and whoa! They had pulled a dragon not too unlike those we had seen out in the desert on our trek."

"Then the Leon said ‘Watch your eyes!’, and even with my eyes closed I could see the two nomads and their dragon thingy all lit bright as Hell!"

"In less than moments the dragon had disappeared and the Leon told the pair they had a dangerous toy."

"The next thing you know he is telling them there are places they might not want to go. The home of the tiger for example."

"Or strange places where only what the candle lit could be seen."

"And then he did some kind of an adjacency transform on the older of the pair. I found out later that it was as though he had become entrapped in some sort of invisible web where he could see us, even hear us, but we could not see nor hear him. He was effectively gone for the moment."

"Then the Leon tells the remaining fellow, who is in amazement at all this anyway, that we might be able to retrieve his companion if they would show us where they got the flux unit, which by the way is with your friend gone the other side."

"So the younger guy, he paused for just an instant before he replied, like he had to think about our proposition. When the one who had temporarily been 'los desaparecidos' renormalized he was shouting gratitude at whatever deities he knew and joyful with his companion for making the right decision. All of which he had witnessed without interaction."

"And then he didn't waste any time pointing out where they had found the flux cube."

"Deeper in the 'temple' and down a short passageway, we found a room that contained a lot of what first appeared to be clay blocks and some pyramid object."

"The Leon could use his flux cube to reveal what the trove of artifacts actually looked like. Numerous devices of some alien technology lay before us."

"So the Leon told the traders they could keep the flux cube they had found. He even showed them how to "conjure bones" or transform extra dimensional flesh to their presence that they might eat it.


Heevus suggested helping to set these guys up to sell vegetables to the other nomads. Was he serious?"

"Of course we knew The Alliance was going to take control of the operation, but while we were waiting for the drop ships, the Leon showed us something about the temple front room."

"From inside the temple room you could operate the flux unit to reveal something new."

"A gateway portal of some sort could be revealed, a passageway or gate to another place not just outside the temple. More of interest from the alien tech. Even the alien flux units were different though the tech was compatible.


The Elon revealed that he had surreptitiously swapped the alien unit the nomads had found with one of our tech."

"Surprisingly, the science boys were the first to drop a ship. While we continued to wait, Heevus told the Leon he was thinking about maybe going through the gateway in the temple room. Then he asked the Leon if 'we' might like to join him and Nyuka, be the adventure of a lifetime.


I guess out of politeness the Leon paused without reply like he might be thinking about it at least a bit. Didn't want to mock the idea as a quick out of hand response."

"But when that mil spec hardware dropped out of the sky with the landers, I knew where his loyalty lay."

"When we saw the land crawlers, we knew our guys were going to be here for the duration."

"On the hop back to the Megaplex, out of curiosity, I asked the Leon what he liked so about the favela. He showed me a viewbie of a drawing he had made of his favela."

"As it turned out we had hardly gotten back to the Megaplex when Jeevus called. Nyuka also nixed a trek through the hole in the wall, and Churl became their understudy."

"We were going to lift from The Valley pretty quickly, but even so one of these sales types knew we were back in the Megaplex and was pitching us for the "new improved" exoderm on this cyborg we had looked at. A true sensual tactodermic delight.


The Leon told them that we had reconnected out in the desert and we didn't really have any continued interest. I am not sure if it was the Leon or the salesperson that looked more surprised when I muttered "Oh bull manure!"


"It was a pretty quiet trip back, like tourists lost in our own thoughts. I mean, you know, I could live with a purely professional relationship."

Feral the Cat interjected a rather catty remark by asking SheLa if she had just sighed at the conclusion of her last comment.

It really wasn't that much of a surprise when the node dropped and all the avatars disappeared. Now, it was just the night and Hyenas City. It really wasn't that much of a surprise when the node dropped and all the avatars disappeared. Now, it was just the night and Hyenas City.